According to the authors, the missing ingredient in teaching writing is "writing to learn (WTL)." It can be defined many ways. The authors spend most of their time defining it via example and through contextual inclusion. All of it boils down to two basic outlooks. The first is private, informal simplicity. The second is public formality. Their next step describes a continuum from formal to informal.
I object to this characterization because in their writing they tell the reader that the informal is the start of any writing and the formal is the outcome. To me this indicates that informal should be the anchor of the continuum while formal should be the end result of the progression from informal. In other words; informal on the left with a line connecting formal on the right.
Never the less, they come up with examples from everyday life that have made me more aware of the distinction between the two ends of the continuum. They describe the informal/private as lists we make to jog our memory for certain events. My favorites are grocery lists, cue cards for presentations and reminders jotted into a calendar in a palm pilot. Palm Pilot? Most readers of this post are probably too young to remember this first attempt at a personal electronic assistant. Electronic personal assistantl? Hmmmmm.... that would be a speechless Seri. Or is it Ceri?
In any event, these are writings for our own personal consumption that are short, not grammatically correct, devoid of attention to spelling and maybe even contain our own personal graphics. Could they mean hand drawn mind maps?
These writings start us on the road to "tuning" our thinking about a subject, an event or an expected result. The authors term is a "tool of thinking." As such we use this tool as a way of getting what's in our head out onto paper where we can manipulate it; i.e., moving it around, adding to it, and taking from it to form a cogent idea or idea stream. Whether words, sketches or mind maps, or quick outlines, the informal private list is a description of how we are thinking.
The how we are thinking idea carries over to reading as well. We engage in different kinds of reading on a daily basis. We are all do some deep reading from the first capital letter of an opening sentence to the final period in the sentences and paragraphs that spill the ideas contained in books, opeds and many other types of documentation we encounter daily. We also "skim" all of the above documents from time-to-time. We skim to get highlights. We skim when time is short. We skim when the material is not very interesting or not very important. So, just like with writing we have different ways of reading.
The formal end of the WTL continuum is occupied by public writing. Or, more precisely, writing for public consumption. It is (hopefully) grammatically correct, free of misspellings and is the crystalization of our thinking. As students we are very familiar with the formal/public form of writing. It has been an assessment tool used against us since first grade! In fact, isn't this blogging experience an assessment of our interpretive skills? Our ability to synthesize? Or, maybe just making sure we have read what we have said we read?
Public writing then is twisted up with the tyranny of summative assessment. The authors put out an interesting twist on writing and assessment. They suggest moving daily to formative assessments via WTLs. They suggest stopping instructions, lessons and labs for two to three minutes. During those few moments have our students write down everything that is swirling around in their engaged, inspired minds at that moment. These writings aren't to be graded. They are just a break to stimulate thinking.
I like the idea. It reminds me of the student created KWL (know, want to know, learned) beginning of science unit artifact I have come know during my first semester of student teaching. Here's a tool for my teaching bag. Sorry, I mean my public lingusitic repertoire.
Hi Warren,
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the continuum of private and public writing. This makes me think of the efferent-aesthetic continuum by Rosenblatt.
However I also found that recently because of the prevalence of social network websites the distinction between two extreme are even more blurred. For example the Facebook and the Twitter, people, from normal ones to celebrities, are posting informal writing publicly, and this seems to become a new "style". Or maybe this kind of sites are not that "formal", therefore they are just "towards the right"?
You're right the language is being debased. Just look at some governmental social media (individuals and official spoken outlets), they're trying to change the meaning of words and trying to shape context away from the originalflow of what the words meant. I wonder to what end?
DeleteSounds like a good idea, however, do we really want to know what is swirling around in our students' heads. :)
ReplyDeleteHHMMMM.....you are probably more right than you know.....
DeleteI like Yun's question regarding the informality of Facebook and Twitter. Indeed, much that is written on those platforms is informal. But sometimes it is less formal than you think. There is a limit to the number of characters, and often messages must be well -thought out to provide bang in such a short message. Sure, there are abbreviations, but I'm not sure that is entirely informal - it is the formal for that platform.
ReplyDeleteThis whole writing to learn thing is really getting me thinking. It seems to be a theme across this course and other readings as well. As I go into teaching Math I'm understanding more and more that it will not just be math I will be teaching.
ReplyDeleteSigh. It is apparently no longer correct (or maybe it just doesn't sell books) to discuss formal English (most commonly found now in writing) and informal English (most commonly found these days in speech). The advent of social media (especially texting) has extended the "informal" terminus a bit (and was widely denounced as the death of proper English a few years ago), but if you go back and see how folks wrote when it was all quill pen and paper, there were a lot of abbreviations incorporated back then. Yrs and Bros and Wm... writing legibly with a quill is lots harder than typing on a keyboard, and it imposed its own limitations.
ReplyDeleteSo some of the diffference goes to dialect, some goes to constraints of the medium. But how we continue to be "surprised" that our students don't show up for school writing a derivative form of what was, a few hundred years ago, the Queen's English, is astonishing to me. Why would we expect kids to show up for school knowing that language (dialect)? And where were they supposed to learn it?
If you happen to be from a high SES home where someone reads to you every night, maybe even Winnie the Pooh (hey, guess where that was written?), or you got the hang of Harry Potter (any guesses?), or maybe you even loved the Lord of the Rings (whaddya think?), you have it made. How many kiddos who never learned that dialect are going to succeed with those books with any reasonable level of prosody? Narnia is a little more accessible, maybe. If you come from homes where that dialect was never learned, and perhaps you have a limited vocabulary, those books are going to feel difficult and out of reach.
If kids CAN hear those books read, early enough, they can internalize the language. But by even 2nd grade, it's hard, because they can't hear the language when they read it.
So the Freemans' book has a lot to be said for it, and maybe this one also... the question is, if the goal is academic success, the kiddos need the academic dialog, and how do we teach it to them in time for it to still matter?